Monte Albers de Leon
It all started with a late night heated discussion with my best friend last summer over the coming onset of AI in all aspects of our lives and what impact it would have on humanity’s concept of goodness. I defended humanity with an allegory and wrote it down on the Notes app on my phone and 10 weeks later, Good was written. Honestly the feeling I had bringing that story to life is not I can simply ignore, and I would gladly end a 22-year legal career to keep writing these stories.
After adding to story on my phone for a couple of days, my friend suggested a more robust method of capturing the story. I asked if he meant Microsoft Word and he asked me if I had heard of Final Draft. I had not. I purchased the software and let the story just come out of me, from beginning to end. The last 90 pages took 2 weeks.
I wanted the main characters to represent the archetypes of human personality, so that the viewer would not only wonder which personality might be best suited to survive an apocalypse, but also witness every type of human find a way to choose to help each other even in the worst of circumstances, maybe even because of them.
A terror attack in the US causes its newly AI-controlled Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) to take synchronize and control all of the country’s military and civilian infrastructure AI in an apparent upgrade in security and efficiency. The AI mistakes a concurrent virulent Covid outbreak in Arizona as a bioweapons attack from China and, despite human orders not to attack, retaliates, setting off the apocalypse. This day is viewed mostly from the perspective of six Amazon.com-like employees in suburban Omaha, Nebraska, trapped in their regional headquarters, who become the unlikely potential saviors of the planet.
I wanted to accomplish two things in writing this:
1) I wanted the story to be believable. I researched every detail to confirm that what I wrote existed and was possible.
2) I wanted the story to have a message, but one hidden in enough entertainment that the audience wouldn’t think they were watching a message movie. I tried to accomplish that with the humor in the tone at times and the pace of the action.
By not forgetting that this is entertainment, and that in order for the audience to benefit from the story, they must want to experience the story, so they must enjoy the story.
Sleep became an issue. I have my own legal practice and was writing this story knowing that my second child was due in a few months and would have no time afterwards for awhile, so I just kept writing some nights until morning. I occasionally took a night off.
Ironically, AI might make a dent in it, so finding the uniquely human element in story telling, the empathic note that humanity shares in its lived experience I think will only increase in value. I hope to be able to give that.
Find that voice that is uniquely yours, the one that speaks when it is just you having the conversation. That’s the voice your writing will find its authenticity. And authenticity is one of the last currencies left.
Frankly, being a screenwriter would be a great long-term goal for me. Sneaking some laughs and a little hope into people’s lives would be a fantastic bonus.